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My Hobo Heart

The train calls out to me, with each clink of its wheels. For adventure awaits in an open boxcar, baiting my hobo heart. Its allure is so strong chug-chug-chugging away. And improvising words, it goes clanking along singing a country tune. As I watch it in awe, wondering where it's been. I want to jump aboard this magical machine, and live my boyhood dream. Clickety-clack it rolls down rusty iron tracks. And slowly disappears around a hairpin bend, till all I hear are squeals.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/26/2018 3:45:00 PM
The magical allure of the railway, beautifully expressed. Well written, and delightful, Emile
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Date: 4/26/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thanks Geoffrey, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/25/2018 9:05:00 AM
Ahh!! Just about to be only dreams here in America. The rail lines are slowly disappearing. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 4/26/2018 5:13:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 7:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this poem from your hobo heart. A good read.
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Susan, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/24/2018 6:56:00 PM
Baongrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Emile.
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Date: 4/25/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/20/2018 5:54:00 AM
The child in you! Just a nice read, Emile!
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Date: 4/20/2018 9:10:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/19/2018 1:34:00 PM
The title is magical for this poem. Beautiful, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/19/2018 2:16:00 PM
Thanks Line, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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