My Hiding Place

I thought I was smart to tell you,
to show you my ways.

My inner thinking,
my heart.

Yet you didn't fully understand me,
and I knew it.

I tried to move past it,
knowing you knew my secret place.

Where I write and dare
dream of the things I desire.

I tried to mask myself again,
removing myself from your presence.

To vent openly and freely,
to be honest again.

I hid myself for reasons,
not just to hide things from you.

To prevent you from being hurt,
from the words I write.

Still you sought me out,
still you wanted to see my thoughts.

Where can I go?
How can I write where you can see?

How can I remain hidden?
I need a new hiding place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 22, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your very well deserved poetry being featured this week Jacen. Love, Carol
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