Get Your Premium Membership

My Hideout

The sun slowly fades from the horizon The dusk clears the way for darkness I wake up only to see the sun fading Even I know, another day shall rise again I soon shall fade away Into my hideout The bliss of the mindless Drifting away I wrap myself in the blanket of yesterdays I shall dance upon the silence Shuttered all the windows and doors Time has beckoned me to a final sleep Into my hideout

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/9/2014 9:31:00 PM
Hi Arthur; I like the poem, but you are not going to any hideout anytime soon. You still have miles to go before you sleep. Good night.... Lucilla
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:29:00 PM
Thank you Lucilla, I hope you are doing well! Maybe I shall just hide here in Soup, I am using to getting into hot water!!!
Date: 2/9/2014 12:27:00 PM
I love this, Arthur. Loved the acrostic written for you too.
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:31:00 PM
Thank you Andrea and yes I loved Lucilla's poem as well, it was very touching! People are so kind here, and its great to be able to read all your poems as well!
Date: 2/9/2014 1:49:00 AM
Disturbing and lovely....Victoria
Login to Reply
Vaso Avatar
Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/15/2014 10:32:00 PM
Thank you Victoria, I succeeded then!

Book: Shattered Sighs