Afolabi Muideen Poet Verse

My Hibiscus

Hibiscus
                         Flower I planted
                      When I was young,I
               Nurtured it till it  grow, one
                 Morning on my door step
                    Step  I find it chopped
                             On the floor


Afolabi
20/5/2015
Contest: Give me a sign
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Eileen Manassian June 14, 2015 at 4:46 AM :( It's sad when something you have invested so much in is taken away like that.....cruel. Find a new flower to plant.

Michael Dom June 14, 2015 at 12:40 AM Hibiscus - the red flowers with deep crimson centre - they can take a good cutting back when they're planted as hedges.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 21, 2015 at 11:33 AM tragic and scary pic...~ olive eloisa

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2015 at 7:25 PM that is sure not a good sign, poet!! To see your lovely flower chopped up!! Good luck in Nette's contest. Afolabi Muideen May 20, 2015 at 10:23 PM Thank You for take your to read and comment on my poem.