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My Hero

Ha-ha spirit vibe penitential living type Spread her smile an every heart whistle She I care for before all nor see or call Ay, I love her, her all nature need cuddle Speech esse, for i know not what leave Ha-ha spirit chuckle for light so tender For life I feel; alive made me, and she 21/04/2017

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/17/2017 8:32:00 AM

Wow small world I went to secondary school in St Ives Cambridge and used to go to Egyptology classes I love history. Lovely to meet you Talin I wish you the very best with the book . Let me know when it is out and how to get a copy. Cheers Chris

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/16/2017 4:51:00 PM

Where are you from or live Talin Are you an English University graduate And may I ask Why did you follow me and how Thank you very very much I appreciate it more than you know I feel privelaged after reading your work Cheers

Talin Kalishian
Date: 6/17/2017 12:16:00 AM

Well thank you for reading my work and yes i am Cambridge U. Graduate I live in egypt Now. I am Armenian and i followed you after reading some of your work.. I am sorry i didnt have much time to comment.. I am launching my new book this year in britain " everything comes alive " i am a bit tensioned as well.. But i hope for the best.. Wish me luck ;)) thankx

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/22/2017 9:03:00 AM

Talin, your "action/reaction" within each line is mesmerizing...leaping to the heavens with love from above...cool effect...keep it up!