My Hero

Ha-ha spirit vibe penitential living type

Spread her smile an every heart whistle
She I care for before all nor see or call

Ay, I love her, her all nature need cuddle
Speech esse, for i know not what leave

Ha-ha spirit chuckle for light so tender
For life I feel; alive made me, and she

21/04/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Flaherty Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 8:32 AM
Wow small world I went to secondary school in St Ives Cambridge and used to go to Egyptology classes I love history. Lovely to meet you Talin I wish you the very best with the book . Let me know when it is out and how to get a copy. Cheers Chris
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June 16, 2017 at 4:51 PM
Where are you from or live Talin Are you an English University graduate And may I ask Why did you follow me and how Thank you very very much I appreciate it more than you know I feel privelaged after reading your work Cheers
Kalishian Avatar
June 17, 2017 at 12:16 AM
Well thank you for reading my work and yes i am Cambridge U. Graduate I live in egypt Now. I am Armenian and i followed you after reading some of your work.. I am sorry i didnt have much time to comment.. I am launching my new book this year in britain " everything comes alive " i am a bit tensioned as well.. But i hope for the best.. Wish me luck ;)) thankx
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April 22, 2017 at 9:03 AM
Talin, your "action/reaction" within each line is mesmerizing...leaping to the heavens with love from above...cool effect...keep it up!
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