My Hero

He sometimes persuades me
There is a better way
To handle things
But in a dedicated way, not mean.

Always takes my side
Even against his mother
Used to be a mama’s boy
Now is my man.

Sometimes gently gives me hints
Maybe I could do better
Always right too
Saving me from my impulsiveness

Always has my back.
Against the world
Would stand in front of a tsunami for me
Is my hero

Is my dedicated man.
My husband.
The father of my babies
I would trade him for no one.

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Date: 10/4/2019 2:22:00 AM
Very creative mind. I like it. Ernilando
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/4/2019 8:45:00 AM
Thank you Ernilando! I am so glad you came by!
Date: 10/3/2019 5:22:00 PM
Your hubby seems to be one in a million, Caren. Very impressive. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/4/2019 12:58:00 AM
It helps that we were best friends from age 15 on. It helps a LOT! This is 53 years of friendship!
Date: 10/2/2019 10:17:00 PM
This is beautiful, and I'm sure he is proud that you appreciate him like this! ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/3/2019 4:18:00 AM
He is all puffed up about it for sure!
Date: 10/2/2019 10:57:00 AM
He sounds like a special person Caren, who will make sacrifices for you. You are lucky. Very nice :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/2/2019 11:47:00 AM
He would do anything for me. Announced he would marry me at 7. I was so angry! I wanted to marry my Daddy. I was six.
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