My Heavenly Journey, Pt. Ii

Part II


               I thought of Jesus’ Ascension into Heaven and the Passover.  There were 
beautiful fields of green clover.  I was so amazed.  Was I loosing my mind?  There were 
animals running free, of every kind.  Even lions, tigers and bears!  The sight of them 
gave me quite a scare.  My guide smiled, sensing my fear.  He said, “No worries- no meat-
eating animals here.”
	There were no “houses”, but many mansions of great size.  As Jesus promised, 
this was surely paradise!  I was just in awe.  Especially when there, with flowing black 
hair, stood my Grandma!  There was so much joy on her face.  I ran into her warm 
embrace.  She wiped my tears.  Her voice was music to my ears.  She said, “Don’t fear 
eternity.  When you time comes, I want you here with me!”  I smiled and shook my head.  
She kissed my cheek and walked on ahead. Oh, how bad I wanted to stay - right then.  But, 
I knew my own journey had just begun.  I knew I would see this magnificent place again.  
This memorable journey reminded me of my sins.
	I knew I had to look deep inside me.  Suddenly, I was back to earth, inside my 
body.  I had a burning desire to now focus on my spirituality; If I was to one day make 
that Heavenly Journey!!

* Entry for Matt Caliri’s Contest- “The Journey”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Orschell Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 1:57 PM
Amazing...I loved the whole story... -Destiny
Freeman Avatar
April 5, 2010 at 8:36 AM
Awesome story from start to finish Jimmy. At the end of this life begins a new one, that puts this one to shame.Smile! Knowledge often leads now, but then Wisdom of Agape will lead without fault. Thanks again for your comments. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 3:48 PM
Great journey write that should do well in the contest...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks fo the comments.Sara
Haick Avatar
April 3, 2010 at 2:44 PM
An amazing poem, JAM...there are many journeys you're going on including the journey as a poet..you are ahead in the game, love..keep moving in that direction.., Much love to you...always, Peanut butter.
La France Avatar
April 2, 2010 at 1:54 PM
You have really grown as a poet, it is amazing, your poetry is powerful and well written.. best of luck in the contest.. love Constance
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