My Heavenly Father

I come to Him each day that I awake 
I ask Him that He keeps me safe from harm
I thank Him for all the things that I take,
For granted such as life without alarm
He's given me so much in this great life
He's healed me from so very many things
When I'm with Him I'm saved from so much strife
I sometimes feel as though I've angels wings
His love envelopes me as I draw near
He's taught me all the things that I have known
With Him I know of faith instead of fear
Each step that I'm with Him I've surely grown
The future that I have with Him is bright
The love that He gives me is my delight

An english sonnet which this is has 14 lines an ababcdcdefefgg end rhyme and is written in iambic pentameter which is 10 syllable line with a soft hard beat.

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Date: 9/24/2016 3:03:00 PM
Charles, congratulations on your win! Sorry Charles your poem would have placed way higher if you would have put a date at the bottom. Very good poem... Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/24/2016 2:56:00 PM
The Lord is great! congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/11/2016 8:22:00 PM
Well written Charles, I'm back.... need a date Please... So Sorry :) you know that you have your mail -- closed : ( Can you please put a date on it...... Hugs
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Date: 3/9/2015 4:15:00 PM
Charles, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Date: 10/23/2014 8:48:00 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Date: 10/23/2014 1:38:00 PM
I gave you a 7 on this, Charles. A well constructed poem on the greatest subject in the world. Cona
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Charles Reese
Date: 10/23/2014 8:59:00 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/30/2014 12:17:00 PM
wonderful rhyme, great spiritual write many congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/30/2014 7:26:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations for your win in Giorgio's contest.
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Date: 9/30/2014 5:52:00 AM
Nicely done sonnet. Nice devotional write, Congrats. Charles
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Charles Reese
Date: 10/1/2014 6:07:00 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/14/2014 8:43:00 AM
Just now found this great sonnet my friend. I see it won in a contest. Bravo and Bravo!!! Giving this a 7 rating..
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Charles Reese
Date: 9/14/2014 12:01:00 PM
Thanks, It's getting easier to write the metered poems.
Date: 9/3/2014 8:14:00 PM
What peace is found when your heart has found this true love and the power it gives us in times when we are down. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/3/2014 10:13:00 AM
Amen, you do well to praise our Father. I enjoyed your Sonnet. Have a read through line ten, the "I" does not fit, I believe you did not mean to place it there.
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Charles Reese
Date: 9/3/2014 1:12:00 PM
thanks and good call on line 10.
Date: 9/3/2014 8:24:00 AM
Nice spiritual write with fine tributes, Charles. congrats
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Date: 9/3/2014 3:10:00 AM
Very lovely tribute to ur dad Charles! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/3/2014 2:31:00 AM
Lovely Charles , congratulations xx
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:49:00 AM
so heartwarming, charles.. rounds of applause to you!
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Date: 9/3/2014 12:27:00 AM
Congratulations and God bless you. Happy writing.
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Charles Reese
Date: 9/3/2014 8:11:00 AM
Thanks for such a high placement in the contest.
Date: 9/2/2014 3:45:00 AM
Rated 7 Charles because it written so well. Verlena
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Charles Reese
Date: 9/2/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thanks, a properly constructed sonnet does have a really nice beat.
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