My Hearts Missing Component

Do you hear my heart knocking You are the key; nothing else is blocking Listen carefully, as it pounds Changes rhythm when you're around Speeds up at the mere thought of you Slows down when you're body wraps mine like glue It burns when you're in pain Flutters when you call my name Grows with each passing moment Has life now; you are the missing component Lay
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Heck Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 11:36 PM
Beautiful poem...I love couplets! And you have SOUP MAIL! Peace always, John
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December 29, 2010 at 7:25 AM
Just stopping by today to thank you for all your comments. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Lay. Welcome to premium membership. Happy New Year to you and yours. Love, Carol
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December 26, 2010 at 9:51 AM
Beautiful write Lay...so sweetly romantic...love it!! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my writes. Hope your Christmas was gloriously blessed! Your nice comments are deeply appreciated as well! God Bless~Mary~
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December 25, 2010 at 11:54 AM
falling in love again. john
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