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My Heart Weeps

my heart weeps while falling foliage lies breathless --- autumn's blanket.

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Skat A

Date: 3/13/2014 2:54:00 AM

a sad touch my BFF...SKAT

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/2/2012 3:35:00 PM

wonderful winner, congrats to you... from Harry

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/8/2012 1:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Well done. love phyl

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/8/2012 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's "Singled Out" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Ralph Mason

Date: 10/7/2012 8:40:00 PM

lovely poem Linda. warm thoughts, Ralph

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/7/2012 9:29:00 AM

Hi Sweet Linda my bff,,, , congratulations with your wonderful win in Debbie's "Singled Out" awesome contest. Hope you make an enjoyable stop on my birthday blog... Enjoy your day, I sure am...always~ PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/7/2012 8:46:00 AM

yes, the blanket did it, sweets.. lovely metaphors!.. congrats on your delightful win!... hello to the doggies and grandbabay!..:) huggs!

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/7/2012 7:50:00 AM

A beautiful blanket - congratulations on your win. Always a pleasure to read your poems.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2012 10:51:00 PM

LInda, this was one of my favorites as well. AMazing, sweetie. Big congrats.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2012 8:36:00 PM

WON 3RD PLACE ... THANKXXX

Len Gasun

Date: 10/6/2012 7:56:00 PM

MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WIN MY DEAR LINDA-MARIE! THIS IS INDEED A GREAT WRITE!!! I LOVE IT!! HUGS:) LEONORA

Joseph May

Date: 10/6/2012 4:57:00 PM

congrats on your win Linda...splendid

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/6/2012 4:55:00 PM

Congratulations Linda for your super win in this contest...Kudos to you dear....

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/6/2012 2:19:00 PM

Glad you listed this as Epigram! It's kind of a haiku ish/ senryu hybrid if you wanted to improve it as one of those you might add a different line 3 since you already have SHOWN [very well indeed] it is fall no need to now [tell] us in line 3 XXXOOO Congrad's on your win..please try the new contest for verses which can be done in 2 lines ;) Light & Love

Terry O'Leary

Date: 10/6/2012 2:02:00 PM

Very nice... Congrats on your win... Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/4/2012 1:45:00 PM

this is fantastic , Linda. I just love it!!

Deb Wilson

Date: 10/3/2012 5:15:00 PM

very beautifully written Linda-Marie..best wishes for the contest...love,Deb

Stephen Parker

Date: 10/3/2012 4:49:00 PM

Leaves that are falling and lying at the same time? Fallen would be better! This reminds me of the wise sayings from the Daoist and Confucian sages. It is a thought-provoking, philosophical rejoinder. Enjoyed your poem!

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/3/2012 4:42:00 PM

A sad aspect to a very beautiful scene my friend! I really enjoyed the ending, the explains a lot for the scene! I love the delightful and reflective poem! What an awesome and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/3/2012 3:51:00 PM

hope this is suitable dor Debbie's contest poets .. hope u all r well and happy .. luv

My Heart Weeps

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