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My Heart Sings

My heart sings lines of poetry Inside my head I dance carefree The grass is cool between spry toes Serene adrift a purple rose How summer days so quickly flee Astray a breezy melody Stir charming notes of fantasy As 'neath blue skies the river flows My heart sings A chickadee and honeybee In flights of sheer frivolity Tossing away all of my woes As truly only heaven knows Soul from here to eternity My heart sings AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 1, 2019 for contest RONDEAU sponsored by CHARLES MESSINA - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 9/2/2019 8:57:00 PM
Congrats on your place in top 100!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thank you for letting me know, Barbara. Appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 9/2/2019 6:37:00 PM
Hello Lin, you have created a beautiful you created. This poem speaks of love and joy. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:05:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Much appreciated.
Date: 9/2/2019 4:03:00 PM
Congrats on this very deserving. BNP.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/2/2019 10:04:00 PM
Thanks, Curtis. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/29/2019 11:33:00 PM
This entire poem 'SINGS." Great work! Kurt
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/30/2019 12:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kurt. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/23/2019 8:02:00 AM
A very belated congratulations on your win, Line.. Your poem captured my heart! So exquisite and flowed beautifully.. This is a fav for me.. Blessings!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2019 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robertina, for the lovely compliment.
Date: 8/6/2019 2:14:00 AM
Congratulations, Line on your well deserved win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/6/2019 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, Subimal. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2019 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! A wonderful poem my friend!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 6:24:00 PM
Thanks, Caren. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2019 10:24:00 AM
One of your best Line! Congrats on your win.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jeanne. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2019 9:26:00 AM
I'm glad to get back here to congratulate you, Line. Hip, hip, hooray!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kurt. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/4/2019 8:58:00 AM
For the one who always has my back :) Congratulations on your 2nd place win, Line. Very well done! Hugs Charlie
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/4/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/3/2019 7:39:00 AM
When I see rondeau, I respectfully take off my hat. Only rules of decency prevent me from taking off anything else when I see such a great rondeau. J'aime and fave.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/3/2019 10:06:00 AM
LOL. Thanks, Kurt, for the most charming visit and compliment.
Date: 8/2/2019 9:31:00 PM
Nice -JT
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2019 9:59:00 PM
Thank you so much, Honestly. Much appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2019 4:49:00 PM
Oh! I am crowning this number one in the contest. I will be so surprised if I don't find it in the Winner's Circle. It is strictly heavenly, perfectly penned, and an instant FAVE. Bravo, Line. ~ gw
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/4/2019 4:22:00 PM
Really surprised to find this only in the #2 position, but judging is subjective, of course... Here's to you again. Just wonderfully penned, Line! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2019 6:04:00 PM
Thank you for the marvelous compliment, Gershon. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2019 8:52:00 AM
this is truly a beautiful piece, well penned Line...love it :) hugs
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2019 2:25:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2019 1:50:00 AM
I like the notes that your heart exudes in this beautiful poem Line , Blessings xo
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thank you, Pixie. Most appreciated.
Date: 8/2/2019 1:35:00 AM
My best to you on this fabulous, breathtaking piece. Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/2/2019 7:24:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely visit and compliment, Panagiota.
Date: 8/1/2019 10:08:00 PM
A beautiful rondeau that made my heart "sing" while I was reading it, Line. Good luck in the contest!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/1/2019 11:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for the lovely compliment.

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