Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

My Heart Is Not An Object

My heart is not an object

but it can feel every word you say

My heart cant be held nor fondled

but it is touched by you each day

My heart can't bleed or break in two

but it cries out loud for your I love you's

My heart can't hide in the shadows

it isn't worn out upon my sleeve

My heart can't be ripped out 

turn blackened or dead

nor take over for thoughts in my head.

My heart is not an object

but for you it fondly beats

 when you come close

and squeeze me real tight

it thumps ever so sweet

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Vladislav Raven January 8, 2016 at 6:08 PM Keep the song singing Tim. Let your heart sing free. Your pen shall ever run gold and your words shall always touch the hearts of the ladies. Another excellent write my Friend. A seven and a fave....Vladislav.

CayCay Godwin December 7, 2015 at 7:48 PM That is an absolute lovely delight of a poem, Tim - oh boy do I like it. 7 CayCay

Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2015 at 12:54 PM - Happy Happy Birthday, Tim !!!! - Lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Tim Smith December 3, 2015 at 12:58 PM Thanks A-L for the birthday wishes !!

Ravi Sathasivam December 3, 2015 at 5:20 AM Excellent write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Charmaine Chircop December 3, 2015 at 4:09 AM A bird yold me that ots your Birthday.Happy Birthday Tim Smith.Thankyou for making this poetrysite a better place ..Enjoy : ) Tim Smith December 3, 2015 at 12:55 PM Like to strangle that bird bird bird....thanks for the birthday wishes and your beautiful compliment.

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2015 at 5:46 PM love that cute sweet ending you put on this one. thump thump !!!

Eileen Manassian December 2, 2015 at 10:07 AM You really know how to do romantic. Sweet write.

Gary Bateman December 2, 2015 at 8:27 AM Hello Tim!! You cover much ground here in these 16 verses. This Rhyme has such a compelling theme, and the way in which you build out and overlap the "My Heart" lead phrase is very well-conceived. My Heart Is Not An Object . . . oh this is so true. Brilliant Work Tim!! A "SEVEN"!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Charmaine Chircop December 2, 2015 at 1:40 AM Very sweet poem.. Yes,the heart is not an object indeed.. I love the last lines - 'When you come close and squeeze me real tight,it thumps ever so sweet ' ... Such a beautiful poem.

Donna Jones December 1, 2015 at 9:01 PM Hey Tim...dropping by to say hey and enjoy one of your lovely poems..

Tim Ryerson December 1, 2015 at 5:15 PM The very definition of a romantic poem Tim...Good stuff and Merry Christmas!! - Tim