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Silent One's My Heart Is A Secret Garden Contest

My Heart Is A Secret Garden

While midnight wears the longest hours 
I circle around like a threadbare of  glow
When the bulb in the room snuffs, fades 
Leaving me alone in throes of love's farewell.

In a world drained by pain, somehow void 
Of claritv and filled with unbearable angst 
Its pale twinkle seems to  speak of loss--
 As I uncover  this heart's misgivings whirling
 like ghastly shadows, 
That even the crush of leaves cannot hold.

How my heart leans nearer to understand
 All the secrets my voice needed to disclose...
 I wander around the yard... mv arms
 Hanging at the sides: a whiff of air blows, 
In need of a private confession, of my acceptance ,
To unleash such heaviness buried 
Within this soul: love 's  second chance 
pleading for my vulnerable strains...

Finally, fresh  blossoms open heart- space
My  pride slain across the mirror of twilight
Until closure ends in deliverance,
With my heart seeking relief from cold, cold arrogance.

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Kendrick Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 9:13 AM
I wanted to give you a belated congratulations on your poem being on the winners' list in this contest. Way to go. Somehow, I missed seeing this contest had been judged. Sara K.
Legros Kelley Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Nettie, congratulations on the placement of your strong and lovely poem! <3
Valles Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations Nette! Well done. Powerful writing.
Croft Avatar
May 22, 2026 at 9:01 AM
Congratulations on your win!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 11:26 PM
I so love this, Beautiful. God bless you and Congrats!
One Avatar
May 21, 2026 at 1:51 PM
Oh Nette, I just love how you started this poem... Your poem feels like you are describing my heart... I found these lines to be touching and ones that many will relate to.. "In a world drained by pain, somehow void Of claritv and filled with unbearable angst Its pale twinkle seems to speak of loss." I can feel the angst and pain in your words and you took me on a journey here.. You really captured the essence of the contest.. Congratulations on your first place my friend.. Blessings..
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2026 at 6:21 AM
this is so deeply moving and a very honest poem dear nette, youv expressed so well and the last line, made me sigh with relief, its never easy ~ a constant process, but youv shown the secrets within your heart so eloquently! Absolute pleasure reading this take on the prompt. Best wishes. Sending you light always
Hind Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 12:22 PM
You might want to change the first line to "midnight" you have it "midniaht " and then in the second stanza "vard" to "yard"- but this is a beautiful poem, Nette <3 just trying to help out. I like your prose,
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 5:47 AM
Hello Nette Onclaud :-) Very nice! Have a very nice day ~ AA
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