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My Heart Hears the Waves

As waves gently glide through my head The rhythmical sound fills my veins, flowing to my heart I feel the pulse of eternity rise up through their flings Sea green mystic depths where my dreams seem to start Flowing to my heart the waves are the magic potion mixed aloud A part of my long past of buried sins, love and devotion Stirring far away feelings, blinding me as I fill my bed I hear words soothing my cuts, a salve upon my emotion Buried sins, love and devotion were my fate, lift me up to heavens door Eagles soaring lazy circles, my thoughts drift upon their wings To my heart the waves are the magic potion mixed forever more And I but a fish in the sea with wings to lift me up upon a cloud

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L. J. Carber

Date: 9/24/2019 9:22:00 AM

This is rather good--you hint at how 'the pulse of eternity' [some might call it God] is all about us, and within us as I tried to show in a recent poem, The Unbound Soul-- and that final line is perfection!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/25/2019 1:45:00 PM

Hello Jean McGee, I like this poem. I like the last verse the best. have a nice day my friend.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/25/2019 7:52:00 PM

and I but a fish in the sea with wing to lift me up upon a cloud...yes, I agree. Thanks for the lovely comment.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/21/2019 7:28:00 AM

That last line is exquisite, as is the whole poem, my friend.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/25/2019 7:51:00 PM

Thanks Caren...I was playing with a tritina idea...but then it did it's own thing! lol