My Heart Does Loops

Love can be strange, love can be a hoot It can make you crazy, make you jump through hoops Bottom line though is this Love is complete bliss When that one comes along and your heart does loops! © Jack Ellison 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Smith Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 1:21 PM
The ticking of my heart, oh so sweet....a wondrous felling that cant be beat...love I do dream....my heart will gleam....when my sweet peach I do meet....hey you did a Loverick : )))
Ellison Avatar
November 5, 2015 at 6:33 AM
Hey! The LOVERICK KING thinks I did good! Whoop whoop!!! LOL
Eastman Avatar
November 4, 2015 at 10:25 AM
When love comes along the women take over... Us girlies are washing the dishes while you guys play in the clover... But we enjoy when you attrack those honey do lists with ferver... Then when the work is done we can both roll in the clover...What? Don't think we will pass that over? Do you? silly rovers...
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November 5, 2015 at 6:32 AM
"rolling in the clover" don't think I remember EXACTLY what that means but I THINK it sounds like fun!!!! LOL xoxox
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