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My Heart Chords

My poem I want to write and encode what is going inside My poem I want it to rhyme a soothing melody and not a mime When I come to my poem's harmony the words are manipulated artfully How could mind and heart consent when the raw in them wouldn’t be vent I have those syllables to count the substance I have to take into account I long to always create a beauty a piece that bears a great part of me A great heed of my poesy I take to pen what is genuine and not fake A stand I now believe in and share with poets of true feelings and flair I learnt how to read and appreciate and what I don’t feel not to comment I didn’t work on the form of my musing but I couldn’t help compose the music My poem to you I paint its words a sample for you, my heart chords. March 29th, 2019

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Jude Herrick

Date: 8/13/2019 7:57:00 PM

A lovely flowing poem from the heart. Very much enjoyed Beans.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 8/20/2019 4:49:00 AM

I'm glad you liked and enjoyed my humble poetry! I'm grateful and thankful for your sincere appreciation.. warmest wishes and blessings.

Jude Herrick
Date: 8/13/2019 7:58:00 PM

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 5/23/2019 11:12:00 AM

This enchanting poem bespeaks the beauty of truth, Besma. It flows from a purified heart. You are a poetess who possess a depth of thought and simplicity of expression that is muse inspiring. Love your work, my dear friend! Love and more love always.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/26/2019 4:13:00 PM

Wonderful.. generous and supportive is your comment on my humble poem, Freddie.. I'm deeply touched and humbled.. thank you so much for rewarding my work.. deepest regards. God bless you.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/10/2019 9:48:00 AM

The melodious music of your expressive heart cords strike the cords in my heart, dearest Besma. Your poem shines in the authentic beauty of its artistry and sparkles in your genuine ability to allow your ardent reader to feel your poetry, your heart and soul - a poetess of creative grandeur who paints her feelings with words and lets me dance with the music of her muse. Beautiful poetry my lovely soul sister. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/12/2019 4:12:00 AM

I'm immensely pleased when the music of my heart fills my ardent reader's heart with joy and beauty.. I'm humbled and honoured when my poetry resonates with a poetess whose talent of a highest beauty.. an artist whose brush of unique colours and magic.. deeply grateful to you dearest Susan for your gracious presence.. for the fine words that uplift and elevate.. for the beauty you add both to my soul and poetry.. my love and hugs soul sister.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/27/2019 9:14:00 AM

WOW Besma, your heart always creates poems of humbleness, your poems show us your heart, a woman poetess who we should honour and pay tribute to. Poetry hugs dear soul sister - your soul soars high above and and hovers above you as well as within you when you write. xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/28/2019 12:44:00 PM

My dearest soul sister, you fill my heart with joy and elation with your sincere and kind words! How generous you are! Overflowing is your beauty! Thank you so much for being here to read and praise my humble poetry.. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/25/2019 7:45:00 AM

I enjoyed the dialogue of a writer's heart..so well expressed, Besma. I hear the music and feel the charm in your write.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2019 5:07:00 PM

An immense elation and honour to have your continuous support and encouragement, dear Vijay.. I'm deeply grateful.. you honour my humble poetry.. thank you so much. God bless you.

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/25/2019 5:41:00 AM

You my dear friend awe me with your immensely creative and wondrous poetic talents! Such as only a true poet can in verse relay to his or her's readers.. A fav,, a true beauty...

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2019 5:05:00 PM

You reward my humble work, Robert, as you read and validate my poem! Your sincere and exhaustive comment is of a great value coming from a great poet I highly value and venerate. My deepest regards. Stay blessed.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/25/2019 2:57:00 AM

I always find our moods dictate what our finished work will be. We have to be patient sometimes but eventually it comes through. Tom

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2019 4:58:00 PM

Absolutely, that's what, among others, defines a poet! Thank you so much, Tom, for the honour you bestow upon my humble poetry.. your support and encouragement are so much appreciated.. my deepest regards. God bless you.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 4/24/2019 11:34:00 PM

Love the idea of, "heart chords"; beautifully done.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 4/25/2019 4:52:00 PM

Thank you so much for enjoying and appreciating the read, M.L.Kiser. best regards.