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My Heart Betrayed

To me I saw you you are still there as beautiful to be in the presence of you. Making all my stars fly a summers day to kiss you all my dreams even to the end My rose unless it gathers thorns Like Cleopatra. I want to be your Mark Antony forever yours into words As my life passes us by never forget the love I have for you. A real dream made for a reason It is so special I can never find the right words until now. You who suffocates my heart The circle of my life who has the very keys beautiful to me as a rose my eclipse. my very own heart broken in all that a woman should be forever beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/4/2013 6:30:00 PM
liam, a nice winning poem..congrats~ SKAT
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 1:02:00 PM
THANK YOU DEEPLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED
Date: 9/4/2013 2:59:00 PM
Lovely piece of poetry! Very deserving of placing 5th in the "Any Poems" contest! Congratulations!...Now, I don't mean to brag, but I was placed first! I am so excited, because this is the first contest that I have ever won!....Thank you for the nice comments on my poem, "Mystic Moon". It means a lot!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 1:01:00 PM
OH WONDERFUL FOR YOU ONE TO PUT TOP SHELF THERE IS ANOTHER POETRY SECTION FAN STORY I SPEND MOST OF MY TIME ON IT YOU ADD PICTURES EDITING GETTING WORK RECONISED FOR PRINTING OR THE LIKES ITS EXCELLENT PLACE THOUGHT I WOULD MENTION
Date: 9/4/2013 8:07:00 AM
Liam, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... always~ Linda
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/7/2013 12:57:00 PM
AH SO SWEET LINDA THANK YOU DEEPLY GREATLY APPRECIATED
Date: 8/24/2013 2:51:00 PM
How very very romantic..Your heart is full of love..Awesome
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 8/24/2013 9:09:00 PM
I GAVE THIS POEM WITH 10 RED ROSES A WEEKEND BREAK IT WAS THROW BACK TO ME THANK YOU FORE THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED

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