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My Heart Beats

My heart beats To the rhythm that you speak Hanging on each phrase My hope rides On your syllable's tide And the things you choose to say My chest fills And for a moment all is still When my name is on your lips My heart gives way To the song that you make With the sweet words that you let slip I am undone Unraveled and un-spun As I realize that I've Never felt this deep Or felt so much at ease Or been this much alive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2010 11:22:00 AM
Great passionate write that speaks of new romantic love...Welcome to soup if I have not told you before...May your stay be long and enjoyable..Sara
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Date: 4/4/2010 2:16:00 PM
I absolutely love this. It's so simple and says all you need to say. Great write!
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Date: 4/4/2010 2:43:00 AM
Lovely feelings!
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Date: 4/4/2010 2:43:00 AM
Brittany - I love the beautiful simplicity of this piece - it uses few words to say so much. Well done. Regards Janette
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:30:00 PM
THIS I LIKE SO EASY TO READ. NICE. p.d. was here
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