My Heart

My heart bleeds
It cries with blood
It was shut straight
With much inflicted pain
My heart is shattered
Sick and feeling weak
Tormented
Still yearning in depress
I chose to mend it
I tried to fix
My heart barely pumps
Now closer to its death
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Treetop Avatar
November 13, 2011 at 3:31 AM
Your poetry is so so deep. I hope the pain your put on paper dispels with each new day, remember one is never alone there is always someone there to hear. This is an unbelievable world, where someone can communicate with poets all over the world. Suddenly one see's there is a poet in Pitcain, out of curosity you look at their poems. You heart immediately connects with that person what a world! (I tried to write this in a private E-Mail but there is no E-Mail sign by your name.)
Yates Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 8:37 PM
Intense and beautiful.... Nice imagery I love it! Great write!
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