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My Heart

My heart bleeds It cries with blood It was shut straight With much inflicted pain My heart is shattered Sick and feeling weak Tormented Still yearning in depress I chose to mend it I tried to fix My heart barely pumps Now closer to its death

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Lizzie Treetop

Date: 11/13/2011 3:31:00 AM

Your poetry is so so deep. I hope the pain your put on paper dispels with each new day, remember one is never alone there is always someone there to hear. This is an unbelievable world, where someone can communicate with poets all over the world. Suddenly one see's there is a poet in Pitcain, out of curosity you look at their poems. You heart immediately connects with that person what a world! (I tried to write this in a private E-Mail but there is no E-Mail sign by your name.)

Ashley Yates

Date: 7/9/2009 8:37:00 PM

Intense and beautiful.... Nice imagery I love it! Great write!