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My Heart

Can't sleep keep tossing and turning
Always thinking I'm living and learning
  I just can't figure out
  What is it about
My heart it won't stop yearning

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Devon Mcglone

Date: 3/30/2010 2:03:00 PM

this was a great write! thank you for sharing! --love or dont love, Devon--

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/22/2010 12:45:00 PM

You won it on merit, my dear. Congratulations. In my opinion, all you need to do is tighten things up, like spelling and punctuation. If that's all that's holding you back, then snap to it. You have some nice original thoughts. I wish I had some of them. As George S. Kaufman once said: "Writing is rewriting." Go over it again and again, then let it drain off. Then, (not every time) , you'll have something really worthwhile. You'll know. Some of the best things NEVER won anything- i.e. Oscars.

Bathsheba Bathsheba

Date: 3/21/2010 11:49:00 AM

Good strong write Faleshia - Thanks for sharing -:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2010 9:47:00 AM

Good limerick form, Falesha, and I wish you well with your necklace in the dream contest! LUv,Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/19/2010 11:09:00 AM

Very heartfelt write, Faleshia. Your limerick was one of the best I read for the contest. And there were some awesome entries, so feel proud! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2010 10:18:00 AM

Well the weekend is upon us and I am trying to get as many poems read as possible today as I will be gone most of the weekend from the Soup. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and I wish you a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration Faleshia. Thank you for your always kind comments. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:47:00 AM

How about church, Faleshia? Maybe your heart is yearning for peace. God be with you through your quest. Life is a lesson. Good guidance makes the trip a little smoother and less painful. Enjoy, learn, and live with a plan. Sweet dreams, my poet friend. Smiles, Dane Ann