My Heart

You loped into view
And my senses awakened
Your energy leapt out, and shook my dormant heart
Even before I spoke my name

I’d given up on ever finding you
You only lived inside my mind
In dreams of wolves and seeing-eyes
One who could take my mind gently by the hand
With eyes to see my soul 
and warm it by the fire in yours

You’ve known me from birth to this moment
Your soul’s breath flows now in my blood
Your touch has flooded my mind
Leaving me stunned in your presence 
My heart has found its home 
And every beat belongs to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/30/2009 10:11:00 AM
This is a very good poem I like the mood of this poem and all the feelings you put into this good job keep writting
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Date: 10/30/2009 9:49:00 AM
I just have to say that this is a lovely poem, it totally melted my heart and I think I am very lucky to have you in my life, keep writing beautiful, Love Mark VV
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Date: 10/30/2009 8:08:00 AM
There is much passion to feel, while reading this poem. Well done! Carrie
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Date: 10/29/2009 6:39:00 PM
Yes, just the right person can make the heart soar. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/29/2009 6:07:00 PM
Quite lovely! What a soft, wonderful poem of love! ~ Carrie
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