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My Heart

My heart 
tells me it's love,
but my head doubts it's true.
It's quite a gnawing conundrum 
My heart and head keep warring with themselves
I'm tempted to take the plunge, but...
truth is I'm all at sea!
Should I believe...
my heart?


Date written: 08/09/2020

*not a true write*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Sands Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Follow the gut instinct separate from both! Thought provoking :)
Ibeh Avatar
August 11, 2020 at 12:51 PM
Thank you, Heidi:-) Great advice!
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 12:46 PM
hmmm in this situation tread carefully... dont let your head rule your heart or is it the other way round!:-) hugs jan xx
Ibeh Avatar
August 10, 2020 at 4:10 AM
"in this situation tread carefully" Indeed! Thanks for dropping by, Jan:-)
Dutta Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 9:10 AM
Head and heart mostly in conflict. No solution. Nicely penned.
Ibeh Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 10:35 AM
Thank you, Anisha:-)
Logan Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 7:16 AM
Tread lightly when your heart wants to take the leap. It can be treacherous. Nicely expressed are your thoughts, Edward.
Ibeh Avatar
August 9, 2020 at 8:33 AM
Thank you, Jenna:-) Blessings to you, my friend!
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