Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

My Health Kick

Still on the health kick routine, still losing weight
Forty-four pounds down, heading for fifty, can't wait
Must be patient
Mustn't get complacent
Time will prove my efforts will be rewarded post haste

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Daniel Turner July 8, 2017 at 11:09 AM You hardly cast a shadow anymore, you're as thin as an old screen door, lost so much weight, no need to operate. that's what happens when you eat albacore:) Jack Ellison July 8, 2017 at 3:14 PM Thank you from non-fish lover!!! Daniel Turner July 8, 2017 at 12:20 PM albacore is tuna Jack:) lol Jack Ellison July 8, 2017 at 12:01 PM "You hardly cast a shadow anymore" I know, my wife has been wondering where the hell I disappeared to!!! LOL Albacore???

Lim'Rik Flats July 8, 2017 at 8:20 AM Last time I kicked my health//it kicked me back, like my wealth//Which is minimal//Nearly criminal!//It avoids me with incredible stealth. SHRINK ON JACKSON!!! Jack Ellison July 8, 2017 at 11:53 AM I'm a-shrinking John John!!! YEHAW! Hope to get down under 200 soon... will have to celebrate! HAVE A HAPPY JOHN JOHN!!!