My Hard Drive Don'T Drive Anymore

'Your computer just might be at risk'
'There is not enough room on your disk'
Oh yeah? I retort with distain
There's PLENTY of space in my brain!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
February 25, 2010 at 5:10 PM
Hey this is almost a limerick! This wants to be a limerick ..it does it does!
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November 24, 2009 at 7:13 PM
Tim this is hilarious.. very funny and terrific to read .. luv those pop ups we all have to deal with on our computers at one time or another... how did u make out with photo posting?? success?? luv.. happy gobble gobble day.. Linda-Marie .. luv..."Sweetie"
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November 23, 2009 at 9:17 PM
You crack me up, Tim. Someone told me I needed to "defragment my disk" once and I covered my computer with protective arms and screamed, "NO!" However, there's not enough "space in my brain" to compensate if my hard drive collapsed. I'd just hang a "closed" sign on the screen and retire in misery. Awesomely funny! A favorite for me! Love, Carolyn
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November 23, 2009 at 8:51 PM
Cute Tim...enjoyed...Marty
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November 23, 2009 at 8:29 PM
LOL! HeHeHe!!! I can hear an echoooooo and it ain't on the 'puter. Great stanza here, Tim Happy Thanksgivingto you. Iolanda
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November 23, 2009 at 7:00 PM
Tim, Tim, Timmy, My Ever-luvin', Caustic-Tongue, Quick-Witted, Cute-Outfitted Fellow ... Loved This Poem and Oh ... Check Your Soup Mail... Kiddo ... MoonBee
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