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My Hard Drive Don'T Drive Anymore

'Your computer just might be at risk' 'There is not enough room on your disk' Oh yeah? I retort with distain There's PLENTY of space in my brain!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/25/2010 5:10:00 PM

Hey this is almost a limerick! This wants to be a limerick ..it does it does!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/24/2009 7:13:00 PM

Tim this is hilarious.. very funny and terrific to read .. luv those pop ups we all have to deal with on our computers at one time or another... how did u make out with photo posting?? success?? luv.. happy gobble gobble day.. Linda-Marie .. luv..."Sweetie"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/23/2009 9:17:00 PM

You crack me up, Tim. Someone told me I needed to "defragment my disk" once and I covered my computer with protective arms and screamed, "NO!" However, there's not enough "space in my brain" to compensate if my hard drive collapsed. I'd just hang a "closed" sign on the screen and retire in misery. Awesomely funny! A favorite for me! Love, Carolyn

Marty Owens

Date: 11/23/2009 8:51:00 PM

Cute Tim...enjoyed...Marty

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/23/2009 8:29:00 PM

LOL! HeHeHe!!! I can hear an echoooooo and it ain't on the 'puter. Great stanza here, Tim Happy Thanksgivingto you. Iolanda

Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/23/2009 7:00:00 PM

Tim, Tim, Timmy, My Ever-luvin', Caustic-Tongue, Quick-Witted, Cute-Outfitted Fellow ... Loved This Poem and Oh ... Check Your Soup Mail... Kiddo ... MoonBee