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My Happy Self

Witnessing the stars turning off thy lit mode With my feet dancing on the crispy road Feeling the dawn with a soft touch of breeze Captivated by the dead musical leaves Singing joyously, making my soul free Hair following the wind, hands grabbing coffee With my eyes shut feeling the glee A cyclon of euphoria is all I see! Widening arms to grasp this moment forever To embrace joy; I'll remember it whenever Mesmerized by such a beautiful scene Wondering how Blessed I have been!! Countless His Blessings are no doubt Always saves me from the drought! Joy for then and for Now! And Here I am! Taking a bow!

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Milton Robertson

Date: 10/23/2016 3:57:00 PM

Very well put, very well said. Such a beautiful poem dancing in my head... Lovely

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 10/21/2016 2:49:00 PM

Great poem well-done you did it well x Welcome x

Skat A

Date: 10/18/2016 11:19:00 PM

S*SARFRAZ KHAN, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Saba Sarfraz Khan
Date: 10/20/2016 6:00:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words, SKAT. :')

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/18/2016 9:52:00 PM

S*Sarfraz, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Saba Sarfraz Khan
Date: 10/20/2016 6:01:00 AM

I would appreciate if you criticize Linda :')

Manmath Dalei

Date: 10/17/2016 1:13:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love...........//Manmath.........

Saba Sarfraz Khan
Date: 10/20/2016 6:01:00 AM

:')