Patrick Krolis Poet Free verse

My Happiest Day

torn between singing Billie Elish
and listening to Lana Del Rey

"the world is a little blurry
or maybe it's my eyes"

between reciting Rumi
and reading Rupi Kaur

"rivers fall from my mouth
tears my eyes can't carry" 

I wonder what if 
I already lived my happiest day?

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Wendy Nipas November 10, 2023 at 2:47 PM What if not? Tomorrow may be a pleasant surprise. Your musings are something else.

Cheryl Glans October 9, 2022 at 10:14 AM Love The melancholy in your write. Sadness can be so beautiful, Thank you for sharing this touching piece. Patrick Krolis October 9, 2022 at 1:46 PM thank you for sharing your thoughts on this, I now look with a new eye at my own words

Jeff Kyser October 8, 2022 at 6:42 AM Your happiest happy has already passed? Get rid of that thought; get rid of it fast. Your happiest days are somewhere ahead. Now that’s a thought to keep in your head! Patrick Krolis October 8, 2022 at 9:56 AM the thing i love about this poem, is how everybody that actually reads it get into a positive and forward looking mood. i think that by putting the horrible thought forward, it triggers us to move and believe in a brighter future, thank you for your beautiful and meaningful comment

Patrick Krolis October 8, 2022 at 6:35 AM This poem was actually written Febr 11, 2022