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My Happiest Day

torn between singing Billie Elish and listening to Lana Del Rey "the world is a little blurry or maybe it's my eyes" between reciting Rumi and reading Rupi Kaur "rivers fall from my mouth tears my eyes can't carry" I wonder what if I already lived my happiest day?

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Wendy Nipas

Date: 11/10/2023 2:47:00 PM

What if not? Tomorrow may be a pleasant surprise. Your musings are something else.

Cheryl Glans

Date: 10/9/2022 10:14:00 AM

Love The melancholy in your write. Sadness can be so beautiful, Thank you for sharing this touching piece.

Patrick Krolis
Date: 10/9/2022 1:46:00 PM

thank you for sharing your thoughts on this, I now look with a new eye at my own words

Jeff Kyser

Date: 10/8/2022 6:42:00 AM

Your happiest happy has already passed? Get rid of that thought; get rid of it fast. Your happiest days are somewhere ahead. Now that’s a thought to keep in your head!

Patrick Krolis
Date: 10/8/2022 9:56:00 AM

the thing i love about this poem, is how everybody that actually reads it get into a positive and forward looking mood. i think that by putting the horrible thought forward, it triggers us to move and believe in a brighter future, thank you for your beautiful and meaningful comment

Patrick Krolis

Date: 10/8/2022 6:35:00 AM

This poem was actually written Febr 11, 2022