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My Hands

Your voice travels all around my soul..
Clinging to pieces that warmly unfold..

Temperatures rise as words are swallowed..
With silent gestures that our hands will follow..



by Michael J Falotico
for Debbie's Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

December 26, 2012 at 7:54 PM

soup mail.... pd

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 30, 2012 at 12:04 PM

Sorry so late but I am here now to say congratulations on your win in this contest Michael. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

November 23, 2012 at 6:04 PM

Michael, , congratulations with your win in Debbie's contest~ PD

Bukang Liwayway

November 23, 2012 at 7:03 AM

lovely couplet..congratulations friend Michael on your win :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 23, 2012 at 3:30 AM

Beautiful Michael and big congratulations on your winning place , hugs xx

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 18, 2012 at 5:08 PM

so few words instill passion mingled with romance painting a marvelous visual Michael luv .. always pure joy experiencing your thoughts .. JG in festive mode as we r sending u to and family the very best and blessed Thanksgiving Day luv .. forever yours .xoxo

Harry Horsman

November 16, 2012 at 5:32 AM

wow, Micheal, so short in words, yet prolific in sentiment, this is really beautiful....

Lillie Williams

November 14, 2012 at 2:58 PM

Wow! incredible piece. I love it so much. Thanks Michael. :-)

Russell Sivey

November 13, 2012 at 11:58 AM

This is such a gorgeous write, I am in such awe with your talent my friend! You have written a magnificent and beautiful poem here Michael! What a delightful and pleasant piece, Great Work!!