My Halloween, Your Horror

It was a Halloween night, one like tonight,
on which this event had taken place
There was a bloody and grizzly murder
by a man, who had no face.
She was just seventeen and all alone,
when that knock came to her door.
That poor little girl, with a future so bright,
is now gone, she’s nevermore.
Blood everywhere, but there was no body,
none the detectives could find.
There are so many thoughts and theories,
but only one really comes to mind.
You see, I have seen this man, too,
this man without the face,
but that was in another far off time
and also in another far off place.
I thought it was over, the murder, the bloodshed.
I guess, now, that I am wrong.
The killer had returned, with blood in his eyes
and now I wish I was wrong.
He lurks in the shadows to cover his trail,
an empty soul, traveling by night.
He seeks those who dared to do him wrong.
Killing them is his delight.
If you were unlucky to ever see his face
you would know he doesn’t have one at all.
For he lost it so many years ago,
when from a rooftop… a nasty fall.
To this day, he seeks his revenge 
on those who had thrown him down.
The rage and the killing doesn’t stop with them,
but also anyone who is around.
How do I know so much of this man?
All you really have to do, is ask.
If I say, I would have to kill you then.
To tell you, I’d take off my mask.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/22/2008 3:34:00 AM
Yikes! This was scary - the thoight of a little one getting hurt is too upsetting for words. Well done, love Kristin
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Date: 10/21/2008 8:05:00 PM
Great ending Michael. Really enjoyed this one. Thanks for sharing Michael
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Date: 10/21/2008 6:35:00 AM
Yikes, Michael!! Like the Phantom of the Opera.....except this phantom is right next door in the neighborhood..sort of?? I will have to be careful when I open my door to trick-or-treaters this year....give us a hint what kind of mask is covering that evil face?!! I'll be on guard! Fun..scary poem!! ~ :) Carrie
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