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My Hair-Do

Girl was born blonde and blue eyed.
Tamed down and made it look right.
As I grew-up my hair looked fryed.
Look oh what a sight.

Entered in Rick's"A bad hair day"contest.

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Debbie Guzzi

January 27, 2011 at 6:31 AM

Ok well if it's for Rick Terrie you need to change the form to CHASTUSHKA Light & Love

John Loving Iii

January 19, 2011 at 9:42 AM

i'm not laughing. jhl

Andrea Dietrich

January 14, 2011 at 7:43 PM

I can't remember which one I gave you heads up on. Anyway, this is sure cute and I'm thinking maybe this is the redo? A redo hairdo. haha. Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

January 14, 2011 at 1:44 PM

I like the revision, Teresa. You could get the proper 7 syllables in the third line if you just said, "As I grew, my hair looked fried." Love you, Carolyn