My Guitar Sings

Just pick me up and twiddle me, Strike some soulful chords, Sweet melodies are hid in me, Unravel records; Together let's tune out today All sorrows and fears, With dulcet cadence let us play Lilting souvenirs. 02/03/17
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Nusker Avatar
March 3, 2017 at 10:36 PM
With short eight lines, you have created a magic. A 7
Neumann Avatar
February 12, 2017 at 8:07 AM
Great poem and guess what. It prompted me to take out my guitar just now. Your poem is music to my ears. Kai
Medders Tobechi Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 12:19 PM
This is great Jo. A joy to read. It certainly looks like a winner to me. GL in the contest.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2017 at 1:22 PM
Music has the ability to do that Jo, I agree. Lovely! 7 ; )
May Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful write Jo...GL in the contest..
Godwin Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Yours is lighthearted and uplifting, an enjoyable light read, well written. Bless you!, cause right now I need a big dose of lighthearted and uplifting. The moods of everyone's combined entries truly reflect the many moods born from music. I thank you for this light weight moment ... CayCay
Canerdy Avatar
February 7, 2017 at 8:44 AM
A 7 for this lively, appealing poem, Jo! Janice
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 7:10 PM
Simply stunning! Jo!
Devonshire Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 12:41 PM
There is a welcome joy in this poem, Jo. Your use of personification for the guitar makes the poem special and it is beautifully written. Best wishes in the contest! I think you have a winner.
May Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 11:14 AM
Beautiful write Jo..GL in the contest
Green Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 9:04 AM
Really nice Jo. Loved the line,"Together let's tune out today" I wish I had thought of that.
Turner Avatar
February 3, 2017 at 9:02 AM
Well done Jo. "Sweet melodies are hid in me" great line! Good luck!
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