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My Guitar Sings

Just pick me up and twiddle me, Strike some soulful chords, Sweet melodies are hid in me, Unravel records; Together let's tune out today All sorrows and fears, With dulcet cadence let us play Lilting souvenirs. 02/03/17

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 3/3/2017 10:36:00 PM

With short eight lines, you have created a magic. A 7

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 2/12/2017 8:07:00 AM

Great poem and guess what. It prompted me to take out my guitar just now. Your poem is music to my ears. Kai

Janis Thompson

Date: 2/9/2017 12:19:00 PM

This is great Jo. A joy to read. It certainly looks like a winner to me. GL in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2017 1:22:00 PM

Music has the ability to do that Jo, I agree. Lovely! 7 ; )

Joseph May

Date: 2/7/2017 3:24:00 PM

Beautiful write Jo...GL in the contest..

Caycay Jennings

Date: 2/7/2017 3:02:00 PM

Yours is lighthearted and uplifting, an enjoyable light read, well written. Bless you!, cause right now I need a big dose of lighthearted and uplifting. The moods of everyone's combined entries truly reflect the many moods born from music. I thank you for this light weight moment ... CayCay

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/7/2017 8:44:00 AM

A 7 for this lively, appealing poem, Jo! Janice

White Wolf

Date: 2/3/2017 7:10:00 PM

Simply stunning! Jo!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/3/2017 12:41:00 PM

There is a welcome joy in this poem, Jo. Your use of personification for the guitar makes the poem special and it is beautifully written. Best wishes in the contest! I think you have a winner.

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2017 11:14:00 AM

Beautiful write Jo..GL in the contest

Chris Green

Date: 2/3/2017 9:04:00 AM

Really nice Jo. Loved the line,"Together let's tune out today" I wish I had thought of that.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/3/2017 9:02:00 AM

Well done Jo. "Sweet melodies are hid in me" great line! Good luck!