My Guardian Angel

Smudge of dirt
upon his cheek.
Scratch on his left knee.
Curly hair
a tangled mess.
Reminding me
~ of me.
Poorest  soul~
who drew the lot:
My guardian to be!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 11, 2009 at 4:56 AM
Patricia - Beautiful poetry - Interesting tale on the subject - very original - God Bless, MJ
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