Premiere Contest WinnerMy Grey Friend

This walk
is my only escape.
My feet—
the concrete—
a closeness so sweet.

Soon the bell will ring,
and the ridicule will begin.

But for now—
the concrete and me,
the rhythm,
my thoughts.

A sweet escape,
wrapped up in a steady pace.

Where will I hide today,
my grey friend,
when away from your steady strength?

The library?
The canteen?
The willow tree?

Oh, pavement,
I ponder and long—
let me melt into you.
Another day
will surely break me.

But if I somehow
make it back to you
as the leaves fall in the afternoon,
it will be you and me once again—
and a steady beat
of heart and feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 11/8/2025 1:33:00 PM
What a good poem - congratulations.
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Roslyn Williams
Date: 11/9/2025 11:30:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 10/22/2025 5:24:00 PM
Very nice write here, you describe how I feel when walking with my daughter around parks, and our neighborhood. Thank you for sharing. Jen
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Roslyn Williams
Date: 11/9/2025 11:31:00 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm so glad it resonated with you.
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