Premiere Contest WinnerMy Grey Friend

This walk
is my only escape.
My feet—
the concrete—
a closeness so sweet.

Soon the bell will ring,
and the ridicule will begin.

But for now—
the concrete and me,
the rhythm,
my thoughts.

A sweet escape,
wrapped up in a steady pace.

Where will I hide today,
my grey friend,
when away from your steady strength?

The library?
The canteen?
The willow tree?

Oh, pavement,
I ponder and long—
let me melt into you.
Another day
will surely break me.

But if I somehow
make it back to you
as the leaves fall in the afternoon,
it will be you and me once again—
and a steady beat
of heart and feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Drake Avatar
July 6, 2026 at 10:33 AM
So poignant.
Gifford Avatar
June 28, 2026 at 11:15 AM
Hello Rosyln, I enjoyed reading your lovely poem, beautifully written. Wishing you a wonderful day.
Harp Avatar
June 26, 2026 at 10:15 PM
Roslyn, This is such a cool poem, and I love the flow of it! I wasn't sure if the poem references an elder, or your dog. But no matter, because either image will do. Versatile poem, and very well crafted! Moon Harp
Springs Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 1:33 PM
What a good poem - congratulations.
Williams Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Thank you!
Donnay Avatar
October 22, 2025 at 5:24 PM
Very nice write here, you describe how I feel when walking with my daughter around parks, and our neighborhood. Thank you for sharing. Jen
Williams Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Thank you for your lovely comment. I'm so glad it resonated with you.
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