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My Greatest Strength

you resound with an aria of a melody, seeking only me with warmhearted fondness. I need you- you crave my existence. I feed you- without resistance. amorous with deep ardent eyes, desiring only selfless deeds, freeing me from all things that bestow a reverie of troubles. I seek you- you found my soul I thirst for you- you drink me whole. saturated in manners of sympathetic devotion you sever my ties to woe. benevolence has been guaranteed and I am astounded by your tenderness. for I shall always be your greatest weakness, you shall be my strength.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/16/2018 7:45:00 AM
Laura, the beauty of selfless devotion is on display in this exquisite, romantic work!
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:50:00 PM
The poem is beautiful and full of sentiments..but the last line is exceptional..A poem in its ownself.
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Date: 7/16/2018 2:50:00 AM
thank you sweet lady :) -luloo

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