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My Great Mum

My mum is lovely I love her as the way she be All my life I owed her As the way I am here To see the sky is blue eyes' Sight in me so shine Beautiful the sky...with the sun's so bright I feel wonderful...in my life... I owed my mum one life Because I was born to life To see the sun and sky Beautiful is today... Beautiful...is life Cause'...I have a great mum...

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Date: 8/6/2024 6:17:00 PM
Pure love oozing in each line of this exquisite tribute to Mom ~ enjoyed!
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Date: 8/4/2024 12:41:00 AM
A lovely tribute to your mum. I wrote a poem about my mother in law (on my Poetry Soup posts). She was very special.
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Date: 7/30/2024 11:44:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/27/2024 6:37:00 AM
I have a great mum too.. we are very lucky.. lovely poem..
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Katy France
Date: 7/27/2024 7:44:00 AM
Thanks to Silent One....

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