My Great Mum

My mum is lovely
I love her as the way she be
All my life I owed her
As the way I am here
To see the sky is blue eyes'
Sight in me so shine
Beautiful the sky...with the sun's so bright
I feel wonderful...in my life...

I owed my mum one life
Because I was born to life
To see the sun and sky
Beautiful is today...
Beautiful...is life
Cause'...I have a great mum...
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Seeker Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 6:17 PM
Pure love oozing in each line of this exquisite tribute to Mom ~ enjoyed!
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August 4, 2024 at 12:41 AM
A lovely tribute to your mum. I wrote a poem about my mother in law (on my Poetry Soup posts). She was very special.
Agustin Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 11:44 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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July 27, 2024 at 6:37 AM
I have a great mum too.. we are very lucky.. lovely poem..
France Avatar
July 27, 2024 at 7:44 AM
Thanks to Silent One....
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