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My Grass Daffodils

Dedicated to my neighboring Agri. University Lawn, Kanpur India.


My Grass Daffodils

The Sun was trying to hide away, 
The Stars were yet to shine on way, 
The trees were silent, 
But the breeze was a little violent. 

In the fading golden light of Sun,
I was lost in simply watching, 
The spreading beauty of Yours in abundance,

The ravishing beauty, was trying to stop me to leave,
To hear and to feel,  the music of winds and Daffodils, 
Coming from the swinging and singing grasses,
From which every year comes out, my yellow daffodils.

Every year I wait for them to come out,
Every year they wait for the raindrops to shower,
To show their short but enchanting appearance 
On the neighboring grassland. 

In those memorable moments, 
Which sometimes I have spent, 
In the alluring company of my sweet Daffodils, 
I have tried to take away with me, 
The swinging and singing splashes of my grass Daffodils.

They come out every year, 
In several hundred thousands of numbers, 
When ever the rains start showering its love, 
Only on the grass lawn of Agri. University.  
I often try to understand, how even a thing like grass, 
Can be so beautiful and so fascinating, 
That, any one can get lost, 
In the eternal joyous singing and 
Swinging of these Grass Daffodils.

In mild rains they bloom, without rains they died away,
Like humans, who gets faded and dull without love
And one day fades away or become jealous or cruel,
Without the tender care and love. 

Every year you fascinate me, every year I get lost in you,
O my childhood friend from where you have come,  
And to where you would go like a mystery of life, I do not know.

Once the rains are over, 
You vanish like the diminishing light,
Like me you also seem to love,
The rains and its mild showers, as a blessing on us.

I know like humans,
You also do not like too much of rains,
And too much of showers,
Which can spoil the beauty of your petals,
And the beauty of you, my amazing Daffodils. 

But like the Grecian Urn, you will continue
To bloom and smile, 
On the grass lawn of Agri. University during rains,
And after that on the pages of my mind, heart and soul,
You would shine like the Sunshine,
Till I am living and dreaming on this earth.

Ravindra 

Kanpur India  26th July 2010
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Horsman Avatar
February 4, 2013 at 2:32 PM
searching an oldie, Ravindra,, Daffodils are so important to me also,, we have millions of them here in the uk,,, and the they will be blooming in about 6 weeks time,, your wonderful poetry reminds me of so much....
Gupta Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 8:52 AM
great work sir...i connect very well with your poem.........
A   Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:57 AM
(( continued )) I love the beauty in life, even if life at times is not to kind. Ravidra, I don't mind being correct for some of my displays. I can be naughty at times. Thanks and have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..Poet D.
A   Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Oh! No not at all Ravindra, you have not offended me at all. I value your opinion, it means much to me. It is I who hopes I don't offend you with my poetry. I would not like to lose your support or opinion. Many times your honesty in a comment makes me smile. I'm a Libra and your wife is a Libra, meaning you know we always have our hearts in the right place. But, I'm also a little mischief, and I love smiling and joking around. (( continue ))
Smalling Avatar
September 29, 2010 at 8:56 AM
Love the allusion to one of my favorite poet, John Keats, of the Grecian Urn ... and may your write continue always to be a thing of beauty.
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2010 at 6:54 PM
what a lovely visual tribute to the amazing daffodils, Ravindra. VERY nice. LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 12:04 PM
Lovely expressions of imagery ...imaginations... fantastic views...sultry lines... a romance of the elements... beautiful words that flow and a magnificent read... breathtaking Ravindra... and appreciate your loving comments so welcome on my poetry as well..with luv... and appreciate your well wishes for my wedding day soon...
A   Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 7:21 PM
It is very lovely Ravindra, enjoyed the way you use all hidden metaphors here Just like John said below..The nature of the poem was very brilliant enjoyed, and have a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
Freeman Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 11:25 AM
Awesome metaphors of the power of love in the nature of earth creations, and even humans. The most awesome thing, I believe, the power of it all is contain in love's promise, like the rains, as they repeat their life giving showers. Brings the Daffodils of love's life into manifestation once again. Agape Moses
Culverhouse Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 6:50 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2010 at 5:08 AM
Very warming descriptive write that brought a flowering picture of a field of daffodils to mind...Sara
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