My Girl With Raven Hair

Residing in our dreams before
years we had not met
opening life's hidden door
hearts that had not yet

connected to one another
hearts being intertwined
emotions of a lover
secrets of our minds

sharing now of present life
thoughts of what could be
having shared sorrows strife
your my destiny

calling through the ages
no other can compare
loving past all stages
my girl with raven hair
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 16, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Aww. Cute poem. I loved the first stanza esp and it's got a lovely flow. Extra points for using my name too, haha. But one thing, shouldn't it be "you're"?? just saying :)
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