My Girl and I Drink From the Fountain of Youth

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My girl and I, we have a thing We do when we’re driving along, If we come by a vacant house on the road, We explore with a beautiful song. Our song has no words, not a single verse, Nothing that’s read from a sheet. Our song is an emotional done with ourselves, By keeping a primal beat. The sheds, the shack, the condos and flats All utilized in that small moment of truth, Utilized and loved by both of our hearts, Drinking from the fountain of youth.

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