My Girl

In your presence acutely tuned,
senses heightened, I'm lost in you.

Warm sensations wash over me,
in brilliant colors, its ecstasy.

Thoughts are clouded, can't really see,
no else does matter, just you with me.

My world is spinning, can't stop this ride,
expose emotions, I cannot hide.

Love is blind, or so they say,
but what I see is clear as day.

True love, a search, some lifetimes spent,
my heart concludes you're heaven sent.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Harty Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 7:47 AM
Very beautiful!! I felt this.
Hughes Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Sam!!
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Aw this is so sweet. Romantic and endearing. Thanks so much Mark for sharing it!
Hughes Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 11:00 AM
Thank you Karen, for your kind words and your visit!
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