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My Girl

In your presence acutely tuned, senses heightened, I'm lost in you. Warm sensations wash over me, in brilliant colors, its ecstasy. Thoughts are clouded, can't really see, no else does matter, just you with me. My world is spinning, can't stop this ride, expose emotions, I cannot hide. Love is blind, or so they say, but what I see is clear as day. True love, a search, some lifetimes spent, my heart concludes you're heaven sent.

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Date: 2/13/2024 7:47:00 AM
Very beautiful!! I felt this.
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Mark Hughes
Date: 2/13/2024 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Sam!!
Date: 10/29/2023 9:25:00 AM
Aw this is so sweet. Romantic and endearing. Thanks so much Mark for sharing it!
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Mark Hughes
Date: 10/29/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thank you Karen, for your kind words and your visit!

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