My Girl

That's my girl, wanting me! Because I'm not you. I don't leave her feeling blue! Is that my girl, glaring at me? stereo-typing me? That's my girl, pressuring me! Is this my girl, trying to change me? Keep me under lock and key? Live a life of mediocrity? My new found girl, selfish in her insecurities. She'll never dim this light, I come with a certificate of authenticity. That's my girl, sitting next to me!! Wanting to be with me. Warm in her Snuggie, collaborating on some poetry. Sexxy as can be... That is my girl, light complected coffee girl! Hazelnut stare, Kahlua scented hair, beauty like this is rare.... That's my girl, wanting ME!! Your jealous and I don't care!!! Jared Pickett 10/09/09 Asavvy1

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 8:54:00 PM

Jared, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda

Date: 6/4/2010 12:38:00 PM

A certificate of authenticity huh????? Very nice. This girl is very beautiful too. I love her description, a light complected coffee girl. I love this poem. I like her Snuggie too! lol Scarlett

Ali Matheny

Date: 11/27/2009 11:26:00 AM

Love it!!

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2009 10:28:00 AM

A brilliant put together, loving your rhymes, that girl she can't help it if she is beautiful, give her some time, she'll rhym some chimes.Smile, Sincerely, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/10/2009 10:22:00 AM

Beautiful write for a beautiful girl Jared >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2009 4:00:00 AM

Nicely done drew me in and keep my short attention span from wandering. Thanks for comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/10/2009 3:12:00 AM

recomment on my the tanka:Once Our Sweet Dream",i love your writing my friend ,and im sure you are able to write better tankas than me-Charma

James Marshall Goff

Date: 10/9/2009 5:43:00 PM

beautiful love story Jared!.... and I'm still smilin' at your self-deprecating comment to Charma about your 'tanka-form' ability!... no way Jared! you are a fine poet! all your styles rock! Brother!... jim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2009 2:18:00 PM

If you treat a girl right, you often reap great rewards. She sounds beautiful with her hazelnut stare and hkahlua scented hair. How great to find a man who comes "with a certificate of authenticity." It's a rare quality these days, Jared. Great work! Love, Carolyn

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2009 1:33:00 PM

Ow you're so proud of your girl.. it seems we have a teaser here:).. love the description,coffee girl,hazelnut stare,kahlua scented hair.. and beautiful..what do you need more Jared.. sweet poem indeed,sweet is the way you like love ths girl you call your girl..-Charma