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My Girl

Pain Fear Love Another argument A step closer to losing her Help I don't know how Don't leave me Broken promises Broken hearts Lies My fault Lost my love Lost my girl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/27/2018 6:39:00 AM
It is a true start when you take accountability, so if this is true, you are on the road to recovery. I hope you have already gotten that and moved on to acceptance that there is another one out there waiting. I like the way you have added no extra words for they were not needed at all. Nice poem Laycie.
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