My Gift To You


At calm dawn I gave you my sunburst day,
heart’s bay shined with bright hue,
for love drizzled colors new
while in your silk sky I flew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:25 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
mysore Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 10:40 PM
Thank you so much.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Romantic! Congrats!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Thank you, Kim.
Toney Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 7:43 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my Straight One-Rhymed Englyn poetry contest! Thank you for the “gift” of this thoroughly delightful poem. :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Subimal, this lovely, upbeat piece made me smile! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Swan Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 6:30 AM
This is beautiful and romantic. a fave. J :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2025 at 9:14 AM
Thank you for your read and for faving.
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