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My Gift of Love

inside the womb hear words of love ~ to hold you touch you darling grandchild Written 5th October 2020 Contest Name How My First Poem Was Born Contest CB Burl 1ST PLACE

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Date: 12/6/2020 4:55:00 PM
Awesome ~
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Date: 10/11/2020 12:06:00 AM
What a magical beginning! Congratulations and thank you for sharing this sweet moment of your life as a poet. I cannot contain my joy in knowing how your 1st poem came to exist.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/11/2020 12:23:00 AM
Ohhh thank you for such beautiful words and so pleased my poem gave you such joy. Thank also for sponsoring the contest JCB. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/8/2020 5:13:00 PM
this almost makes me think you began writing as a grandma. Either that or as a mother. Wonderful, and congrats.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2020 1:44:00 AM
my muse certainly came alive at the thought of seeing and cuddling my first grandchild... I can still feel tingles when I think about his birth ~ I was there and it was magical... thanks for your congrats Andrea xxx
Date: 10/8/2020 9:43:00 AM
Beautiful, Ann ~ congrats on your top win
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2020 1:41:00 AM
Blass you dear Line and thank you for your lovely comment. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/8/2020 8:09:00 AM
amazing Ann how grandkids change us often for the better
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2020 1:40:00 AM
Oh yes they certainly do Brian ~ they bring out my inner child, as I attempt to dance around the room and plan midnight feasts, haha... appreciate your visit Brian. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/8/2020 5:48:00 AM
Awww....such a feel good poem....Congrats on your win Ann :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2020 1:37:00 AM
Bless you Carol and many thanks. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/8/2020 5:24:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Ann :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/9/2020 1:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your congrats and lovely hugs. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 10/4/2020 11:24:00 PM
Women are always anxious to see their off springs. And rightly so. ~~
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/5/2020 12:15:00 AM
Have changed my words for I wrote it at 3.00 am this morn and I hope my second version has just as much impact. I wrote my poem two weeks before the birth of my first grandchild, so consumed with love was I. It is called "I bequeath to you my Teddy"... hope you like it too dear Victor. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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