Brooke Dylan Poet Quatrain

My Gift Is Love

That word Love, that surpasses all
the eternal flame, you hold in your hand..
My darling my gift to you, thousand veils of light
passions of our minds, in heaven so true
where God's counsel will stand, is love, more love
and laid on a path laid bare, is my hand to yours
from the eyes of the heart, and there will be no comparing
or timeless forms of eternal unquestionable loving souls
as inborn from the passion from heaven..
Dear darling,
My gift to you is ever endearing forbearing lovely loving....LOVE...

Brooke Dylan 2014

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Monterey Sirak May 22, 2014 at 6:17 AM And the greatest of these is love. Well done my friend.

Casarah Nance May 18, 2014 at 6:40 PM love is a beautiful thing and your poem is just that. Great words Brooke :)

Deborah Shiells May 18, 2014 at 5:07 PM Hi Brooke, My friend~ This is very touching and it certainly speaks to all of us. given and measured here in this write. Thank you for sharing this write with us here. Love and Peace, Deborah Brooke Dylan May 18, 2014 at 5:48 PM love and peace Dear Deborah. I am sending prayers your way.. hugs

Margaret Franceschini May 18, 2014 at 4:04 PM your writing has given me a visual of a bride and groom, expressing their vows, beautiful wording, you have combined both your emotion and and expression into one.

Jack Horne May 18, 2014 at 3:12 PM beautiful write : ) Brooke Dylan May 18, 2014 at 3:13 PM Thank you Jack

Jeremy Street May 18, 2014 at 2:16 PM Heaven, We Won't Need The Type Of Love These Mortal Fleshly Shells, Yearn For Here Upon Planet Earth ? Our Joy Shall Be Complete With Cups Thus Running Over....Babylon, Will Just Have To Keep Such Minute Matters Unto Itself! Yet, Poetically Speaking As In Human Terms; Tis Quite A Lovely Little Painting: Super Ku's...Love, Jeremy * Brooke Dylan May 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM HA HA... JEREMY you are so cute..lol

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2014 at 1:54 PM - There is nothing greater than LOVE - A beautiful poem, Brooke! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Brooke Dylan May 18, 2014 at 2:26 PM Thank you Dear Anne..