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My Gaze Wonders

I gaze into my sons' lives and see myself One's a fitness trainer So was I at his stage One's a finance man Ditto for me at 24 One's a soldier Now that's what I secretly yearned to be My youngest son is the 'real me' ~ tho' he's no forever wannabe

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Date: 8/21/2020 8:11:00 AM
The free soul of a wanderer...Nice one
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2020 7:40:00 PM
Yeah, you're right. Unfortunately my feet stayed glued, while my mind wandered and wondered. Oh, well... Thanks, Arturo!
Date: 8/21/2020 5:31:00 AM
Very nice, my friend! Love to see what Our children do with their lives. Blessings to all of them. Do any of them write?
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/21/2020 12:00:00 PM
Thank you, Kim... And yes, it is interesting to see how our kids 'pan out...' As for writing, they all write really well, but so far nothing creative. The fitness guy has published training manuals for kettle bells and such. We'll see what happens down the road... :) gw
Date: 8/21/2020 5:28:00 AM
Proud dad you are Gershon...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/22/2020 7:39:00 PM
You are an ace detective, Michael, and you are spot on. My kids are truly my pride and joy. Lucky me, Gershon

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