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My Gaze Is Fixed On You

Some like to gaze at stars; I stare instead at you. Compared to how you glow, They sparkle like the moon. You light my inner darkness; Your power shines so bright. You hold the whole night sky On shoulders blazing tight. You raise each crimson sun With arms of strength and trust. On you I place my faith You’ll break the dawn from dusk. You flood me with fresh oxygen, Exhale my every breath. My molecules are vivified; You love me Life from Death. I’m fully formed when we embrace. Your beauty’s growing on my face; All imperfection is erased. Some choose to gaze at stars at night, But I’m transfixed by You.

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Date: 4/25/2023 4:47:00 PM
I’ve enjoyed reading your poetry this evening, Jennifer, welcome to Poetry Soup. John
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Jennifer Thomas
Date: 5/9/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much! I’m finally getting how this Poetry Soup works!
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Jennifer Thomas
Date: 5/9/2023 2:59:00 PM
Thank you so much! I’m finally getting how this Poetry Soup works!
Date: 4/19/2023 3:29:00 PM
Nice love poem, Jennifer. I like this one.
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Jennifer Thomas
Date: 5/9/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for all your feedback. You’re very artistically generous!

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