My Gashes

I wrote our names on a leaf and sent it with the wind until September return....
As the trees throw there leaves ours will never fall or burn

Like sun shines the empty lonely sky you shine into my soul
When  earth doesn't stand still you hold my hand and never let me fall

Like the stars needs their moon to light up the night I need you to light up my path , to light up my world
To be the one who shatters my fears and holds me tight when life gets so empty , lonely and cold

Desert ain't a desert with no sand 
Neither my gashes can be healed without a touch of your warm , soft hand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sage Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 3:10 AM
lovely write Dalia...beautiful
Shahein Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Thanks dear , I'm glad u liked it, hugs / / :)
Legend Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 1:37 AM
beautiful poem...a 7
Shahein Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 7:57 AM
Thank you very much my friend for ur lovely comment and ur delightful visit , hugs / / :)
Boddie Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 9:11 PM
the journey of Love is Eternal....with the passion of an inferno....fulfilling the deepest of desires....melting like ice in the fire....leaving only happiness and hope....that way, we will forever cope....;)
Shahein Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 9:15 PM
Thank you my friend for ur delightful words , sure it means alot for me.....Happy by ur lovely , sweet visit....hugs / / :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:52 PM
Interesting long lines... '...you shine into my soul,' '...without a touch of your warm, soft hand,' gorgeous phrasing and imagery! Well done dalia! Best wishes, Keith
Shahein Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Thank you so much my dear friend for ur kind and delightful words , much appreciated, hugs / / :)
Bordner Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:24 PM
There is something so sweet and young in a heart that would wish with leaves this way Dalia...you have such a native, natural way with sharing your wishes with the world around you, its so beautiful to me. "As the trees throw their leafs ours will never fall or burn..." such resolute love woman, such calm foresight you possess...J.A.B.
Shahein Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 9:32 PM
Thank you so much my dear for ur supportive words and your precious , mesmerizing words , I'm truly honored by ur sweet lovely comment and by ur delightful visit my friend , many thanks and hugs / / :)
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