My Garden of Eden

Ever see such a sight?
my garden of Eden
so precious she be
the joy it brings
as the rays reflect brightly
like rainbows towards eternity

there it is, has caught my eye
my garden of Eden I say with pride
cool, clear and wet crystals fed 
while thankfully smiles, up goes the head
as she perks straight to the sky
what a beautiful sight oh my!

circling sounds of buzzing
from one end to another amuses my ear
beautiful music it plays
my garden of Eden's alive
it brings joy in sad hearts
happiness while it's being played

my garden of Eden soon sleeps
the cycle of things after the reaps 
so crisp and chilled under the stars
remembering the rainbow that danced in-front of my eyes
tears not shed she didn't die
So very much alive!

sleeping calmly until season of change
damp reflections, sun upon a rainbow
will rise from the familiar carpet 
an undeniable beauty from below
shines all over my garden of Eden.
Sparkle, colors and beauty survives indeed!


oh listen close! the rumbling of the ground
as the earth moves the carpet of colors in motion
in trance are they, as one by one the space is filled
with completed pallets of color she stands perked up straight
look at the beauty while they sway, mother nature is proud
the colors gleaming like a parade of rainbows side by side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/14/2016 6:54:00 PM
SUSAN, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 3/10/2015 5:33:00 AM
Very rich, vibrant and hopeful. Just the sort of verse I need for this bright blue spring morning. a #7 from me. Viv x
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Date: 3/10/2015 5:10:00 AM
So beautiful. Your words brought a smile to my face
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