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My Garden

My Garden
(Shandorma)

A peaceful
Place where quiet dwells
Warmth of spring
Fills my heart
Flowers catch the morning sun
Bluebirds serenade



Shandorma Poetry contest. Sept.13

Copyright © Erich Goller | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/1/2012 10:33:00 AM ERICH, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 9/1/2012 10:50:00 AM thank you very much Destoyer,Hugs!Erich

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/30/2012 6:28:00 AM Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Erich. Love, Carol Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/30/2012 3:40:00 PM thank you very much Carol,Hugs!Erich

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/29/2012 1:57:00 PM ((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..So descriptive in such a few words..Sara Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/29/2012 2:15:00 PM thank you very much Sara,Hughs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/28/2012 8:20:00 PM Congrats on your win with this gem! Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/28/2012 8:55:00 PM thank you very much Andrea,Hugs!Erich

Lee Ramage Date: 8/28/2012 6:18:00 AM I'd like to sit in your garden,it sounds so nice. Well done and congrats on your win. Lee Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/28/2012 7:59:00 AM thank you very much Lee,Hugs!Erich

Kim Merryman Date: 8/27/2012 7:57:00 PM Sounds like a place I would love to be! An excellent write, Erich! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 PM thank you very much Kim for the contest, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2012 8:51:00 PM I really love this one, visiting it again. You and Russell are both up on your forms. I have done oodles of triolets but was out of practice on them. So I changed it really fast!! Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/21/2012 9:14:00 PM thank you very much Andrea, I know one can forget some of those forms, Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/20/2012 11:39:00 PM your shadorma is really beautiful, Erich. Did you mean quiet for line two? If the judge is a stickler for spelling, that could prevent this beauty from placing. Love those bluebirds and the peace and the flowers and the warmth. It's my kind of place. Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/21/2012 8:06:00 AM thank you very much Andrea,Thank you for the correction.Hugs!Erich

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/17/2012 6:04:00 AM I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Erich. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us always and wishing you the best for the contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply Erich Goller Date: 8/17/2012 10:25:00 AM thank you very much Carol, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich