My Garden

My Garden (Shandorma) A peaceful Place where quiet dwells Warmth of spring Fills my heart Flowers catch the morning sun Bluebirds serenade Shandorma Poetry contest. Sept.13

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:33:00 AM

ERICH, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Erich Goller
Date: 9/1/2012 10:50:00 AM

thank you very much Destoyer,Hugs!Erich

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Erich. Love, Carol

Erich Goller
Date: 8/30/2012 3:40:00 PM

thank you very much Carol,Hugs!Erich

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2012 1:57:00 PM

((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..So descriptive in such a few words..Sara

Erich Goller
Date: 8/29/2012 2:15:00 PM

thank you very much Sara,Hughs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2012 8:20:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this gem!

Erich Goller
Date: 8/28/2012 8:55:00 PM

thank you very much Andrea,Hugs!Erich

Lee Ramage

Date: 8/28/2012 6:18:00 AM

I'd like to sit in your garden,it sounds so nice. Well done and congrats on your win. Lee

Erich Goller
Date: 8/28/2012 7:59:00 AM

thank you very much Lee,Hugs!Erich

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 7:57:00 PM

Sounds like a place I would love to be! An excellent write, Erich! Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Kim

Erich Goller
Date: 8/27/2012 8:40:00 PM

thank you very much Kim for the contest, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/21/2012 8:51:00 PM

I really love this one, visiting it again. You and Russell are both up on your forms. I have done oodles of triolets but was out of practice on them. So I changed it really fast!!

Erich Goller
Date: 8/21/2012 9:14:00 PM

thank you very much Andrea, I know one can forget some of those forms, Hugs!Erich

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2012 11:39:00 PM

your shadorma is really beautiful, Erich. Did you mean quiet for line two? If the judge is a stickler for spelling, that could prevent this beauty from placing. Love those bluebirds and the peace and the flowers and the warmth. It's my kind of place.

Erich Goller
Date: 8/21/2012 8:06:00 AM

thank you very much Andrea,Thank you for the correction.Hugs!Erich

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/17/2012 6:04:00 AM

I have enjoyed reading your well written poetry this morning Erich. I hope to be able to read more of your poems soon. Have a wonderful weekend and thank you for sharing your writing with us always and wishing you the best for the contest. Love, Carol

Erich Goller
Date: 8/17/2012 10:25:00 AM

thank you very much Carol, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich