My Garden 3

Ants crawling up leg
  Dropped my hoe and ran away
      Lotion on my leg


Just learned about syllables in Haiku. Updated
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Neumann Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 6:16 AM
...and yet the gardening is surely a lotion for your soul...
Blanca Avatar
April 8, 2018 at 9:38 AM
Yes Kai, the soul smiles in the garden.
Singh Avatar
March 16, 2018 at 12:07 PM
Present times beautifully expressed.
Blanca Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 6:15 PM
Thanks Smita
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