My Friend, Red-Tail Hawk

Once long ago he flew high and free
The flight was farther than most can see
Then one day as I watched him in his flight
Close to evening when it was getting dim light

Seeing him in the dim light there was a change
Feathers flew__he pitched and turned seemed strange
Slowly falling to mother earth landed in lurch
Going close so I could maybe see if he was hurt

He was on the ground with feathers all around
Swiftly going home and getting a bag to cover him round
Took him to a rescue ranch to see if he had a chance
He would heal the all seem to feel, on his perch he had stance

But he did not heal__ his psyche was permanently crushed
He longingly viewed the sky remembering when he flew freed
Stuck on his perch he grew swiftly old no more freedom no more gold
Hating each day but not able to go on with his goal

Dreaming, night dreams and day dreams to fly high again
To soar with the eagles up in the night sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 8:48 AM
congrats on the feature poem and enjoyed reading your work!!
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Sara. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 11:16 AM
Congrats Sara on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..AlohA Land...
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July 5, 2010 at 10:35 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup homepage this week, you are such a great talent! keep up the great writes, and enjoy the honor. Love, Adeleke
Austin Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Aha! An animal lover after my own heart. I feed hundreds of little ones each day in my back yard. Included are a bunch of stray cats. I somehow hope no one takes them in. They have the whole out of doors for their investigtation - live free. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Fisher Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 7:21 AM
Wow - what a fabulous write. Many congrats on your feature. Rgds Janette
Richards Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 8:39 PM
A lovely poem to be featured, Sara. This was a lovely written poem for the plight of the hawk! Well done. ~ Carrie
Harris Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 7:17 AM
A vivid and well written poem, Sara, even though it tells of the sad plight of a flightless red-tailed hawk. The paradox of once having known the glory of flight, and the ignominy of never again soaring in the sky make this a deeply touching poem. Carl.
Spence Sr Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 9:42 PM
This is a very touching piece of poem. I like the theme and how it flows through the poem. The essence of the words also speaks to humanity. Great job! Joseph
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June 29, 2010 at 6:55 PM
If this is true, it is sad. I winced as I read it but the ending provided uplifting thoughts, ( sic.) I take it that this really happened to you?! You have a noble heart. Regards, Gerard
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:25 PM
Wonderful write and so sad but very brilliant Sara.. enjoyed your creativity tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..luv..
Mehta Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 6:11 PM
I enjoyed the last couplet.
Slaughter Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Ah...sad poem! I love the majesty of the Eagle and the hawk. They really do belong free, so it is sad when one cannot after an injury.
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